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Here i lay
Within my own pool of bloody rose
With Angels and demons soaring about.
Chain to the earth i struggle to get free.
Cursed to be the fallen one.
I cry invisible tears.
Darkness swollowed me whole.
I cry out,burning with passion and pain.
I want to be with them
Tainted but yet so pure.
The curse of the fallen one
Longing to be with them.
Oh sweet darkness...Bring me up there
Curled up in pain....
My skin..Scarred..from the past..
So here i lay..Watching them
Here i lay

Look at all the pretty Angels and demons....
....My angels and demons that watch over me...soaring endless tormenting me......
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Zanelicious Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i really love this picture of this Angel!!
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TubaChick13 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
Love it
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demonloverv Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011
very powerful you captuer a lot in so little words u are very very good.
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SarahByronX Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Sounds like you and me could have an intelligent conversation after reading this. Incredible.
-X
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sexybitch77 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
pretty :)
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spidergod619 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011
it was powerful i like it it reminds me to always fight for wat i want and never give up and to never let the darkness swollow me
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Chriskillsyou Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010
WOW such great peotry i like it (:
i write my own peoms but none
are as good as urs
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vampirekiss789 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
it was interesting and full of emotion... i liked it
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vampire-lover18 Featured By Owner May 6, 2009   Photographer
I like it!
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FaLLeN--x--AnGel Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2008
This made me shiver. It is a very powerful poem. I am sure that many of us can equate with how the subject is feeling. It is dark and raw. I sense a release in your words. I hope you find your peace?

Thank you for sharing this with us.x
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